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This was based on an incident that happened at work when a coworker got a papercut from a fortune cookie fortune. I thought it was pretty funny in a slightly twisted way. The events were rearranged so that it was a couple having take out at night, but the dark omen is still there. What do you all think? Is it a little more interesting? I liked the coloring- does it work? Also, does anyone have any confusion in regards to how to read the progression of panels? I thought it was pretty clear, but that same coworker found it confusing.

Let me know what you think!